crop is a big tight on the right
the keys of the instrument are slightly overexposed
her face is out of focus
other than that, nice portrait, got potencial, try to use a quicker exposure or shot several pictures so you get at least one in focus

Nice portrait. Good composition and colors. +7

Sad description.....but very nice capture!......A little overexposed or pushed too high....you can not see the division on the keyboard.....and maybe a slight lower point of view may work better......a lower perspective gives the impresion of submission to the subject a high one can give the feeling of dominance over the person...
Very impressive capture.....many children all over the world strive to survive since early age.
Carlos

Beautiful face with troubled expression. A good effort. A sharpenning in PS would have worked better to the face. Keep it up!

Thanks Folks ,
You know I am not a photographer I just do it as hobby so your critiques are very helpful to improve my skill in photography.
more than anything else I consider myself as Motion Graphic Designer and if you look at my website you wil notice how it effects on my works?!
Http://www.ahooraweb.com
I fixed the overexposed and also the division of Keyboard , but Can not do anything about Crop and perspective as this is the only shut I have from this kid in my camera.

Cheers,

• Ahoora ( Alireza Sadreddini )

hehe you are not a photographer, neither we are p
just practice a bit and learn, and it will be fine no need to be a real photographer to make nice pictures